かきつらね昔のことぞ思ほゆる
雁はその世の友ならねども
雁はその世の友ならねども
- Roma-ji
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Kakitsurane mukashi no koto zo omooyuru
kari wa sono yo no tomo naranedomo - English Translation
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Ranged in a line, they
bring back to me the way things
were in former days,
though the geese were never friends
of ours in that time at all
- Meaning
- Ranged in their line they bring back the way things were, though the geese were never companions of ours in those days.
- Commentary
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Part One: Suma
Yoshikiyo answered Genji's poem with this one. Son of a provincial governor in Harima, he was also the man who had earlier told Genji about the Akashi novice's daughter. Here, as one who had followed his lord into exile, he sets down his own longing for the capital. The Minbu no Taifu and the former Lieutenant followed, making four poems in sequence.
"Kakitsurane" is forming a line, taking up Genji's "line." "Former days" are the days in the capital. "Though they were never friends of that time" concedes that the geese have nothing to do with it, and says they bring it back regardless. Admitting that the association has no ground is precisely what shows how strong the homesickness is.
- Author
- Murasaki Shikibu
- Source
- Genji Monogatari
- Other
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- These waves on the shore, hard to tell from the sound of one who weeps, worn out with longing—is it that the wind blows here from where I long
- Are the first wild geese a line of the ones I long for, that their voices crying as they fly the sky of travel should be so sad
- The geese that of their own will left the eternal land and cry as they go—how far off, like clouds, I used to think them from myself
- Even the wild geese that have left the eternal land for strange sky here take some comfort while they keep from falling out of the line