classic waka stream

The young horse that lays
its reflection beside yours
as the grebes do—when
would it ever be drawn off
and parted from the sweet flag?

Meaning
When would the young horse, that lays its reflection beside yours as the grebes do, ever be drawn away and parted from the sweet flag?
Commentary
Part One: Hotaru

 This is Genji's reply. A pair of poems with no reserve in them, the narrator remarks. He said, half in jest, that though theirs was not a life of mornings and evenings together, it rested him to see her; and since she was of an easy temper he spoke quietly and at length. She gave him the bed and lay down herself behind a curtain-stand. Having long since given up any thought that she might lie near him, she made no move, and he did not press her.

 "Nihodori" is the grebe, whose pairs keep close together and which therefore stands for conjugal harmony. "Lays its reflection beside" is to set two images side by side on the water. The young horse is Genji, the sweet flag the lady—both taken straight from her own poem. In "hikiwakaru" the "hiki" again plays on drawing up the flag and leading the horse, answering her pivot; and the question is rhetorical: never. Pairing sweet flag with young horse on this day has precedent in older poems, and borrowing that pattern he warrants that nothing between them will change. And yet they sleep apart; the quiet distance between the words and the fact hangs over this pair of poems.
Author
Murasaki Shikibu
Source
Genji Monogatari
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