花の枝にいとど心をしむるかな
人のとがめん香をばつつめど
人のとがめん香をばつつめど
- Roma-ji
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Hana no e ni itodo kokoro o shimuru kana
hito no togamen ka o ba tsutsumedo - English Translation
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It is to that branch
that my heart clings the closer—
though I keep folded
and hidden away the scent
that others would find fault with
- Meaning
- It is to that branch my heart clings the closer, though I keep hidden the scent that others would find fault with.
- Commentary
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Part One: Umegae
This is Genji's reply, written on paper of the same red-plum color, with a spray from the garden broken off and tied to it. The Prince complained that it was a letter whose contents one could guess at, and that Genji was hiding something and hiding it deep, and showed himself very curious. "There is nothing in it," said Genji; "it is hard to be suspected of what is not there"—and while the inkstone was at hand he wrote this. Or so, at least, the narrator says it may have run.
"That branch" takes up her "branch the flower has fallen from," and means the lady herself. "My heart clings" is a heart dyed fast, with the dyeing of scent behind it. "The scent that others would find fault with" is a love the world must not learn of. "Tsutsumu" is to wrap up and to keep back, folding incense and folding feeling together. Under the cover of an exchange about incense he lets her know that his feeling has not ended—with the Prince at his elbow agog to know. That the narrator ends with "or so it may have run" shows she is quite aware how near the edge the poem goes.
- Author
- Murasaki Shikibu
- Source
- Genji Monogatari
- Other
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- Though the boatman drifts with nowhere to put in, and the wind harries him, he does not work his way along the shore in a quarter unlooked for
- The scent of the flower does not stay on the branch it has fallen from—yet shall it sink at all lightly into the sleeve it passes to?
- At the warbler's voice my heart will wander further still from me—here where already it has been dyed fast to these flowering boughs
- Until their color and their scent have passed to you, this spring at least, do not go away from this house where the flowers are in bloom