牡鹿鳴く秋の山里いかならむ
小萩が露のかかる夕暮
小萩が露のかかる夕暮
- Roma-ji
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Saoshika naku aki no yamazato ika naramu
kohagi ga tsuyu no kakaru yūgure - English Translation
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How must it be now,
the mountain village in fall
where the stag bells out—
this evening, when the dew lies
heavy on the small hagi
- Meaning
- How must it be now, that mountain village in autumn where the stag calls, this evening when the dew lies heavy on the small hagi?
- Commentary
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Part Three: Shiigamoto
In autumn the Eighth Prince died at the mountain temple, and the sisters were left in deep grief. Hearing of it, Niou sent this poem in condolence. Word came from Kaoru as well, so that two letters from the capital stand side by side and prepare the later course of the story of the Uji sisters.
The small hagi stands for Naka no Kimi, and the dew hints at tears. Kakaru is both the dew settling and "such as this." The belling of the stag is the standard voice of autumn sorrow, and raises the whole scene of the house in mourning at once. Even in a poem of condolence he likens her to a flower, and his feeling for her is already visible in that.
- Author
- Murasaki Shikibu
- Source
- Genji Monogatari
- Other
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- Though this hut of grass should fall to ruin when I am gone from the world, this one word, I would believe, will neither wither nor part
- In what age to come could I ever part from it— the hut of grass where we have bound between us now a promise for long ages
- In this mountain place where nothing but tears close in like a standing mist, at the hedge the deer as well lift their voices all as one
- The call of a deer that has lost its companion in the morning mist— could anyone hear it as one hears the ordinary?