桜色の庭の春風跡もなし
訪はばぞ人の雪とだに見ん
訪はばぞ人の雪とだに見ん
- Roma-ji
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Sakurairo no niwa no harukaze ato mo nashi towaba zo hito no yuki to dani mimu
- English Translation
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Cherry-coloured now
the garden, with the spring wind
and not a footprint
if a caller came, he might
at least take it all for snow
- Meaning
- The garden is the colour of cherry, and the spring wind blows across it with no footprint anywhere; if someone came, he might at least take it for snow.
- Commentary
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Book Two Spring Poems II 134
Headnote: for the contest in fifteen hundred rounds.
Three poems follow in which fallen petals are seen as snow. This is the first, on a garden of flowers that no one has trodden. The headnote assigns it to the contest in fifteen hundred rounds.
Fujiwara no Teika was one of the compilers of the Shin Kokin Wakashu. In Book One he is the poet of the thirty-eighth, fortieth, forty-fourth, sixty-third and ninety-first poems.
The time is after the cherries have fallen; the place is the poet's garden.
The occasion was submission to the contest.
The first line has the whole garden turned the colour of cherry by fallen petals.
The second line brings in the wind that stirs them.
The third line means: not a footprint either. Nothing marks the fallen flowers because no one comes. It is the situation of Norikane's hundred and twenty-fifth poem, given here in a visible form, as an absence of tracks.
The fourth line supposes a visitor.
The particle in the closing line means at least, if nothing more: if they will not be seen as flowers, let them at least be taken for snow. The old comparison of fallen blossom to snow is entrusted here to the imagined eye of another. The poem that follows also asks that they be seen as snow, and the two are linked.
- Author
- Fujiwara no Teika
- Source
- Shin Kokin Wakashu
- Other
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- Scattering, mingling the flowers from a distance on Yoshino's slopes are white cloud on the summit tossed and troubled by the storm
- On Yoshino's height the cherries on the high peak have fallen and gone and even the storm is white at the daybreak of the spring
- Today, at the least the flowers at their height fall across the garden though they will not melt away look on them and call them snow
- Was it left behind for the one who was not asked that it lingers still the white snow of the blossom kept back from tomorrow's fall