隔てゆく世々の面影かき暗し
雪とふりぬる年の暮かな
雪とふりぬる年の暮かな
- Roma-ji
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Hedateyuku yoyo no omokage kakikurashi yuki to furinuru toshi no kure kana
- English Translation
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Ever more remote,
the faces of the years gone by
are darkened and blurred,
falling and aging like the snow
at the ending of the year
- Meaning
- The faces of bygone years grow ever more distant, blurred and darkened, and like the snow they have fallen and grown old—so ends the year.
- Commentary
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Book Six Winter Poems 693
Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Composed at the end of the year."
This is the third poem of the year's-end sequence. It sings of a year's end when the faces of years gone by, ever more distant, are darkened and blurred and have fallen and aged like the snow. The headnote continues from the preceding poem, and this poem too was composed at the end of the year.
The author, "Daughter of Toshinari, Master of the Empress Dowager's Household," is Shunzei's Daughter. A granddaughter of Fujiwara no Shunzei, she was adopted as his daughter. She became the wife of Minamoto no Michitomo and was active in Retired Emperor Go-Toba's poetic circle.
The scene is the end of the year as snow falls, and no place is specified.
The direct occasion is composing on the arrival of the year's end.
The first line, "hedateyuku," means "growing ever more distant with each year."
The second line, "yoyo no omokage," refers to the images of people and events seen over the many years gone by.
The third line, "kakikurashi," means "darkening them from sight," with "kaki" as an intensifying prefix. The images are darkened by tears and by the falling snow.
In the fourth line, "yuki to furinuru," "furi" carries both snow "falling" and "growing old" with the years: "have fallen and aged like the snow."
The last line, "toshi no kure kana," closes with the exclamatory particle "kana." The poem lays the distance of time over a snowy scene: the images of years gone by recede as if darkened by falling snow and grow old as snow piles up. Where the preceding poem used reasoning to sing of longing for the departing year, this poem entrusts the images of past years to a snowy scene. Like 676 in this book, which used the double meaning of "furinu" to overlay snow and old age, it uses the double meaning of "furu" to overlay snow and the passing of time.
- Author
- Shunzei's Daughter
- Source
- Shin Kokin Wakashu
- Other
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- Might someone, perhaps, long for me without a word from me to prompt them? While I lingered, wondering, the year has reached its end
- Knowing all the while that, far from leaving, the years cling fast to the body, why is it that I long so for the year that fades away?
- Will the coming year seek me out and find its way to where I dwell, trusting the road to the steed that races past the gap?
- Grieving all the while, this year too has reached its end— a life as brief as dew, with only this, that I still live, to keep as its remembrance