み狩する狩場の小野の楢柴の
なれはまさらで恋ぞまされる
なれはまさらで恋ぞまされる
- Roma-ji
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Mikari suru kariba no ono no narashiba no nare wa masarade koi zo masareru
- English Translation
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Where the royal hunt
sweeps the fields of the hunting grounds,
oak scrub grows thick:
not our closeness has grown more,
but only my love for you
- Meaning
- Like the oak scrub on the moors of the royal hunting grounds, our closeness never grows, and only my longing for you grows the more.
- Commentary
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Book Eleven Love Poems I 1050
Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Topic unknown."
This is the third poem of the sequence on love that cannot meet, sung through places and things. Through the oak scrub of the hunting moors, the speaker sings that familiarity does not grow, only longing. The headnote gives no topic, and the circumstances of composition are not recorded.
The author, "Hitomaro," is Kakinomoto no Hitomaro. A poet of the Asuka period, he served as a court poet under Empress Jitō and Emperor Monmu and left many poems in the Man'yōshū. Later ages revered him as the saint of poetry.
A poem of the same sense appears in the Man'yōshū; in the Shin Kokinshū it is included as a poem by Hitomaro.
In the first line, "mi" is an honorific prefix: where the hunt is held.
In the second line, "ono" means moorland, "o" being a prefix.
In the third line, "narashiba" is a thicket of young oak branches. The first three lines form a preface that leads by repeated sound to "nare."
The fourth line, "nare wa masarade," means "our closeness does not grow."
In the last line, the emphatic "zo" is resolved by "ru." The same verb appears negated in "masarade" and affirmed in "masareru," showing only longing growing while no meeting comes. After Ise's reproach in the preceding poem, a poem of longing that grows without meeting is placed here.
- Author
- Kakinomoto no Hitomaro
- Source
- Shin Kokin Wakashu
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Naniwagata mijikaki ashi no fushi no ma mo awade kono yo o sugushite yo to ya
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