classic waka stream

人知れず思へば苦し紅の
末摘花の色に出でなむ
Roma-ji

Hito shirezu omoeba kurushi kurenai no suetsumuhana no iro ni idenamu

English Translation
Loving unbeknown
to all the world is hard to bear
like the crimson dye
of the safflower in bloom
let my love now show its color
Meaning
It is painful to love without anyone knowing; like the crimson of the safflower, let my love now show its color openly.
Commentary
Book Eleven Love Poems I 496

Headnote: "Topic unknown"
Unable to bear the pain of loving in secret, the poet thinks to show it openly, like the color of the safflower. The poem captures the turn of a heart leaning away from hidden love toward revealing it. The vivid color of the safflower symbolizes the intensity of a love long held back.

First line, "Loving unbeknown": hito shirezu means without others knowing.
Second line, "to all the world is hard to bear": omoeba kurushi means "loving thus is painful," and the poem pauses here.
Third line, "like the crimson dye": kurenai is the vivid red taken from the safflower.
Fourth line, "of the safflower in bloom": suetsumuhana is another name for the safflower, so called because the flowers at the tips of the stems are picked. With the third line it forms a preface leading to "color" in the last line.
Fifth line, "let my love now show its color": iro ni idenamu means "let me reveal it," with na the perfective nu and mu expressing intention. Poem 503 of this book sings of a heart resolved not to show its color, forming a contrast, and the next poem, 497, carries on the word iro.
Author
Unknown Poet
Source
Kokin Wakashu
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