classic waka stream

須磨の海人の塩焼き衣をさをあらみ
まどほにあれや君が来まさぬ
Roma-ji

Suma no ama no shioyaki goromo osa o arami madō ni are ya kimi ga kimasanu

English Translation
As the salt-burning
robes of fishers at Suma
are so coarsely woven,
have we grown so far apart
that you no longer visit?
Meaning
The robes worn by the salt-makers of Suma are coarsely woven, their threads far apart. Is it because our bond, too, has grown so loose that you no longer come to me?
Commentary
Book Fifteen Love Poems V 758

Headnote: "Topic unknown."
From the coarse weave of a salt-maker's robe, the poem laments a lover whose visits have grown infrequent. The first three lines form a preface leading to madō, "far apart," turning from a simple seaside work garment to the grief of love.
Book Three of the Man'yōshū contains a poem likening the coarse wisteria robe of the Suma salt-makers to infrequent meetings, showing that this image was already old.

The first line names the fishers of Suma in Settsu, a place known for salt-making. The line is hypermetric.
The second line names the rough robe worn while boiling salt, the core of the preface.
In the third line osa is the reed of a loom, and the o ... mi construction gives the cause: because the reed is coarse.
In the fourth line madō means both a coarse weave and infrequent visits. Ya asks a question, resolved by the attributive in the last line.
The last line, kimasanu, is the honorific kimasu with negative zu in attributive form: you do not come.
Author
Unknown Poet
Source
Kokin Wakashu
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