ねぎ言をさのみ聞きけむ社こそ
果てはなげきの森となるらめ
果てはなげきの森となるらめ
- Roma-ji
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Negigoto o sa nomi kikikemu yashiro koso hate wa nageki no mori to narurame
- English Translation
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The shrine that has heard
so very many prayers,
it must be that shrine
that will in the end become
a forest of cast-off sighs
- Meaning
- The shrine that has listened to so many prayers will surely, in the end, become a forest grown from people's sighs, heaped up like firewood.
- Commentary
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Book Nineteen Miscellaneous Forms 1055
Headnote: "Topic unknown"
Shrines hear people's prayers, but the poet jests that the sighs of unanswered prayers will pile up until the shrine becomes a forest of "nageki," firewood. The pun on "nageki," sighing and firewood, links the shrine grove to the multitude of sorrows. From this poem through 1057, three poems in a row treat "nageki" as firewood.
The author, "Sanuki," is Sanuki. Nothing further is known of her.
First line, "Negigoto o," means the prayers offered to the gods.
Second line, "sa nomi kikikemu," combines "sa nomi," so very much, with past conjectural "kemu": must have heard so many.
Third line, "yashiro koso," uses "koso," answered by the perfective "rame" at the end.
Fourth line, "hate wa nageki no," is a pivot word joining "nageki," sighs, and "nageki," firewood.
Fifth line, "mori to narurame," takes the perfective "rame" in response to "koso." Shrine, grove, and firewood are associated words.
- Author
- Sanuki
- Source
- Kokin Wakashu
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Nageki koru yama to shi takaku narinureba tsurazue nomi zo mazu tsukarekeru