classic waka stream

我が背子は仮廬作らす草なくは
小松が下の草を刈らさね
Roma-ji

Waga seko wa kariho tsukurasu kaya naku wa komatsu ga shita no kaya o karasa ne

English Translation
My dear one, I see
you are building us a lodge;
if thatch should run short,
beneath the little pine trees
cut the grasses growing there.
Meaning
My dear, as you build our makeshift lodge, if you are short of thatching grass, why not cut the grass that grows beneath the little pines?
Commentary
Book One Miscellaneous Poems 11

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "A poem by Nakatsu-sumeramikoto on her way to the hot springs of Ki"
Speaking warmly to her husband as he builds a makeshift lodge for the night, the poet suggests that if the thatch runs short he might cut the grass beneath the little pines. Capturing a small moment of life on the road, it reveals a tender, attentive affection. Like the hut "thatched with grasses we cut" in poem 7 of this book, it conveys how travelers lodged on royal journeys. The left note records that the Ruiju Karin calls it the Sovereign's own poem.
Nakatsu-sumeramikoto is a title whose bearer has never been settled. The leading view identifies her as Princess Hashihito, daughter of Emperor Jomei and consort of Emperor Kōtoku; another names Yamatohime, consort of Emperor Tenji. The title is understood to mean a noble woman who mediates between sovereign and gods, or an interim sovereign.

The first line, waga seko wa, uses seko, a woman's fond word for her husband or lover, to name the one addressed. It appears to take up the "you" of the preceding poem.
The second line, kariho tsukurasu, "you build a makeshift lodge," uses the honorific su. While respectful, it depicts the concrete labor of making a shelter on the road.
In the third line, the character for "grass" is read kaya, grass for thatching. Naku wa is a supposition: "if there should be none."
The fourth line, "beneath the little pines," points to something close at hand, adding intimacy and a sense of the young pines' vitality.
In the last line, karasu is the honorific of "to cut" and ne a particle of wish addressed to another: "please cut it." Repeating the kaya of the third line, it urges him gently in a light cadence.
Author
Nakatsu-sumeramikoto
Source
Manyoshu
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