classic waka stream

しつたまき数にもあらぬ命もて
何かここだく我が恋ひわたる
Roma-ji

Shitsutamaki kazu ni mo aranu inochi mote nani ka kokodaku aga koiwataru

English Translation
Like a humble bracelet,
worthless, not worth counting, this
life of mine, and yet
why is it I go on so,
longing, longing all this while
Meaning
With a life as worthless as a humble cloth bracelet, why do I go on longing so much?
Commentary
Book Four Love Poems 672

Headnote: "A poem by Abe no Asomi Mushimaro"
With so worthless a life, why does he go on longing so much? He wonders at his own love. It shares its last two lines with Lady Sakanoue's poem 658, suggesting the close relationship between the two described in the left note to poem 666.
The author, Abe no Mushimaro, was an official of the Nara period and a cousin of Lady Sakanoue on her mother's side.

First line, "Like a humble bracelet," is shitsutamaki, a pillow word for "not worth counting," from a plain cloth bracelet.
Second line, "worthless, not worth counting, this," means not counted among things.
Third line, "life of mine, and yet," means with such a life.
Fourth line, "why is it I go on so," is the same as the fourth line of poem 658.
Fifth line, "longing, longing all this while," is the same as the last line of poem 658.
Author
Abe no Mushimaro
Source
Manyoshu
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