classic waka stream

人言を繁みか君が二鞘の
家を隔てて恋ひつつまさむ
Roma-ji

Hitogoto o shigemi ka kimi ga futasaya no ie o hedatete koitsutsu masamu

English Translation
Is it people's talk,
thick as it is, that keeps you,
like two blades in sheaths,
in a house apart from mine,
longing, though so near to me
Meaning
Is it because the gossip is so thick that you stay in your own house, separated from me like two swords in one scabbard, longing all the while?
Commentary
Book Four Love Poems 685

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Seven poems by Lady Ōtomo no Sakanoue"
Is it because of gossip that he stays apart in his own house though so near, longing all the while? she wonders of a man who does not come. Futasaya, two swords in one scabbard, is taken as a figure for things close together yet divided.
The author, Lady Ōtomo no Sakanoue, was a daughter of Ōtomo no Yasumaro and half-sister of Ōtomo no Tabito. She left many poems in the Man'yōshū and is esteemed as a leading woman poet.

First line, "Is it people's talk," names people's gossip.
Second line, "thick as it is, that keeps you," uses the questioning ka: is it because it is so thick? It is closed by mu in the fifth line.
Third line, "like two blades in sheaths," names futasaya, a double scabbard, taken as a pillow word for "separate" from its partition.
Fourth line, "in a house apart from mine," means keeping our houses apart.
Fifth line, "longing, though so near to me," uses the honorific masu: are you, I wonder, longing on?
Author
Lady Ōtomo no Sakanoue
Source
Manyoshu
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