classic waka stream

雁がねの鳴きつるなへに唐衣
たつたの山は紅葉しにけり
Roma-ji

Karigane no nakitsuru nae ni karakoromo Tatsuta no yama wa momiji shinikeri

English Translation
Even as the geese
were heard to cry overhead,
like Chinese robes cut,
the hills of Tatsuta
have turned to autumn colors
Meaning
Even as the wild geese cried, the hills of Tatsuta turned to autumn colors.
Commentary
Book Seven Autumn Poems III 359

Headnote: "On the occasion of a journey to Yamato."
The poet says that as the wild geese cried, Mount Tatsuta turned to autumn colors. It sets side by side the deepening of autumn caught by ear and by eye, the cries of the geese and the colored leaves of the hills.
According to the headnote, it was composed on a journey to the province of Yamato. Mount Tatsuta stands on the border of Yamato and Kawachi and is famous for its autumn leaves. Here, within the sequence on wild geese, autumn leaves appear for the first time.
The poet is listed as "anonymous," and the composer's name has not come down to us.

The first line, "Karigane no," means "the wild geese."
In the second line, "nae ni" means "together with, even as": "even as they cried."
The third line, "karakoromo," Chinese robe, is a pillow word for "tatsu," since robes are cut, "tatsu."
In the fourth line, "tatsu" is a pivot word meaning both "to cut" cloth and the place name "Tatsuta." 383 and 386 of this book use the same phrase, "karakoromo Tatsuta no yama."
In the last line, "keri" expresses sudden realization: "they have turned to autumn colors."
Author
Unknown Poet
Source
Gosen Wakashu
Prev Poem
Mono omou to tsukihi no yuku mo shirazaritsu kari koso nakite aki to tsugetsure
Next Poem
Akikaze ni sasowarewataru karigane wa mono omou hito no yado o yokanan