classic waka stream

あしひきの山の木の葉の落ちくちば
いろのをしきぞあはれなりける
Roma-ji

Ashihiki no yama no konoha no ochikuchiba iro no oshiki zo aware narikeru

English Translation
Of the leaves of trees
in the rugged mountains, those
fallen and decayed—
how their color is regretted,
so deeply moving it is.
Meaning
How deeply moving it is to regret the color of the fallen, decaying leaves from the trees of the mountains.
Commentary
Book Seven Names of Things 417

Headnote: "Kuchibairo no oshiki (dry-leaf-colored tray)"
The poet says it is deeply moving to feel regret for the color of the fallen, decaying leaves from the mountain trees. Singing of the late-autumn pathos of regretting the color of leaves that fall and rot, the poem hides the name "kuchibairo no oshiki" given in the headnote in the run of sounds "kuchiba iro no oshiki" from the third to the fourth line. The headnote names the thing hidden in the poem.
The author, written as Sukemi, is Fujiwara no Sukemi. A son of Fujiwara no Hirotsune, he was a mid-Heian poet known as Tōroku. He excelled at poems hiding the names of things, and his personal collection is the Tōrokushū.

First line, "ashihiki no," is a pillow word for mountains.
Second line, "yama no konoha no," means "the leaves of the mountain trees."
Third line, "ochikuchiba," means "fallen, decaying leaves." From its final "kuchiba" the name is hidden across the upper and lower verses.
Fourth line, "iro no oshiki zo," means "that their color is regretted," hiding the name "kuchibairo no oshiki" together with "kuchiba" in the third line. It is emphasized by the particle "zo."
Final line, "aware narikeru," means "how deeply moving it is," with "zo" resolved by the attributive "keru."
Author
Fujiwara no Sukemi
Source
Shui Wakashu
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