君が名の立つにとがなき身なりせば
おほよそ人になして見ましや
おほよそ人になして見ましや
- Roma-ji
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Kimi ga na no tatsu ni toga naki mi nariseba ōyoso hito ni nashite mimashi ya
- English Translation
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If I were a man
who bore no blame at all
for the rumor of your name,
could I see you as merely
one of the common crowd?
- Meaning
- If I were one who bore no blame for the rumors about you, could I look on you as just anyone at all?
- Commentary
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Book Twelve Love Poems II 707
Headnote: "Sent to a woman"
The poem asks whether, if the poet bore no blame for the rumors about the woman, he could regard her as just anyone. The headnote shows it was sent to a woman. Where the preceding sequence lamented rumors about oneself, this poem speaks as one responsible for the rumors about the beloved and pleads that he can no longer think of her as a stranger.
The author, Fujiwara no Tadafusa, was a son of Fujiwara no Okitsugu and served as Master of the Right Capital Office among other posts. He excelled at music, and his poems also appear in the Kokinshū.
First line, "kimi ga na no," means "of your name," turning from "waga na" and "nakina" in the preceding sequence to the beloved's name.
Second line, "tatsu ni toga naki," means "blameless in its rising," with "toga" meaning a fault deserving reproach.
Third line, "mi nariseba," means "if I were one," with "seba" a counterfactual supposition.
Fourth line, "ōyoso hito ni," means "as an ordinary person."
Final line, "nashite mimashi ya," means "would I look on you so?" with "mashi" a counterfactual auxiliary and "ya" rhetorical.
- Author
- Fujiwara no Tadanobu
- Source
- Shui Wakashu
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