奥山に立てらましかば渚漕ぐ
舟木も今は紅葉しなまし
舟木も今は紅葉しなまし
- Roma-ji
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Okuyama ni tateramashikaba nagisa kogu funaki mo ima wa momiji shinamashi
- English Translation
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If it still were standing
deep within the mountain wilds,
this boat rowed by the shore,
its timber would be even now
turning red with autumn leaves.
- Meaning
- Had it still been standing deep in the mountains, the timber of this boat rowing along the shore would by now have turned to autumn colors.
- Commentary
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Book Seventeen Miscellaneous Autumn Poems 1126
Headnote: "On going to Karasaki in autumn for a purification rite and seeing a boat go by"
The poet says that had the boat rowing along the shore still been a tree standing deep in the mountains, it would have turned to autumn colors by now. The headnote shows it was composed when he went to Karasaki in autumn for a purification rite and saw a boat go by. Picturing in the boat on the shore of Lake Biwa the tree that once stood in the mountains, it expresses his feeling at the coming of the season of autumn leaves.
From here, poems on autumn leaves follow one another.
The author is Priest Egyō, a monk who served as lecturer of Harima province and associated with the poets who gathered at the Kawara-in. He is counted among the Thirty-Six Immortal Poets of the middle ages.
First line, "okuyama ni," means "deep in the mountains."
Second line, "tateramashikaba," means "had it been standing," with "mashika," the irrealis form of the counterfactual auxiliary "mashi," answered by "mashi" in the final line.
Third line, "nagisa kogu," means "rowing along the shore."
Fourth line, "funaki mo ima wa," means "the boat's timber, by now."
Final line, "momiji shinamashi," means "it would have turned to autumn colors," with "na" a perfective auxiliary and "mashi" the counterfactual auxiliary.
- Author
- The Monk Egyo
- Source
- Shui Wakashu
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