classic waka stream

水底に深き緑の色見えて
風になみよる川柳かな
Roma-ji

Minasoko ni fukaki midori no iro miete kaze ni nami yoru kawayanagi kana

English Translation
Deep beneath the stream
the color of rich green hues
shows to the eye there,
and in the wind they ripple:
the willows along the stream.
Meaning
Deep in the water the rich green shows, and in the wind the willows by the river ripple and bend together like waves.
Commentary
Spring Poems 55

Headnote: "Willows at the water's edge"
The topic is willows at the water's edge. The deep green of the willow is reflected at the bottom of the river, and when the wind blows the willow branches sway together along with the waves on the water.
Joining the green reflected in the water with the branches swaying in the wind, the poem depicts a scene where water and willow are one. The willow poems continue across various settings: a mountain dwelling, rain, wind and the water's edge.

First line, “minasoko ni”: at the bottom of the river.
Second line, “fukaki midori no”: of the willow's deep green.
Third line, “iro miete”: the color showing, reflected in the water.
Fourth line, “kaze ni nami yoru”: nami yoru joins nami, waves, drawing in, with nami, in a row, the branches bending together.
Fifth line, “kawayanagi kana”: the willows by the river, closing with the exclamatory kana.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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