classic waka stream

旅寝する草の枕に霜冴えて
有明の月の影ぞ待たるる
Roma-ji

Tabine suru kusa no makura ni shimo saete ariake no tsuki no kage zo mataruru

English Translation
Sleeping on my way,
on the pillow made of grass
the frost lies freezing,
and the dawn moon lingering
I find myself waiting for.
Meaning
Sleeping on my journey with grass for a pillow, the frost lies frozen there, and I find myself waiting for the light of the moon that lingers into dawn.
Commentary
Winter Poems 516

Headnote: "Lodging on a journey on a cold night"
The topic is lodging on a journey on a cold night. Sleeping on the road with grass for a pillow, the poet cannot sleep for the cold of the frost on his pillow, and finds himself waiting for the light of the moon that rises toward dawn. The hardship of a sleepless night on the road is expressed through the heart that waits for the moon.
The poem sets the cold of a winter night in a traveler's makeshift lodging, pairing with the poems around it that tell of winter in a mountain dwelling.

First line, “tabine suru”: sleeping on a journey.
Second line, “kusa no makura ni”: kusa no makura, a pillow of grass, is a makeshift bed on a journey.
Third line, “shimo saete”: sayu is to be chill, the frost lying cold.
Fourth line, “ariake no tsuki no”: a hypermetric line of eight syllables; ariake no tsuki is the moon that remains in the sky as day breaks.
Fifth line, “kage zo mataruru”: zo is an emphatic particle and ruru the attributive of the spontaneous auxiliary ru, I cannot help but wait; it closes the binding.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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