classic waka stream

朽ちてただしをればよしや我が袖も
萩の下枝の露によそへて
Roma-ji

Kuchite tada shioreba yoshi ya waga sode mo hagi no shizue no tsuyu ni yosoete

English Translation
Let them rot away,
let them wilt, it matters not,
these my sleeves as well,
likening them to the dew
on the clover's lower boughs.
Meaning
If my sleeves simply rot away and wilt, so be it; I will liken them to the lower branches of the bush clover drooping with dew.
Commentary
Love Poems 601

Headnote: "Love expressed through autumn flowers"
The topic is love expressed through autumn flowers. Even if his sleeves, soaked endlessly in tears, rot and wilt, the poet says, so be it; he can think of them as drooping like the lower branches of bush clover wet with dew. The tears of love are likened to the dew on the clover, combining a wish to pass them off to others as autumn dew with a despairing lament.

First line, “kuchite tada”: rotting away, simply; the sleeves worn out by endless tears.
Second line, “shioreba yoshi ya”: shioru is to wilt: if they wilt, so be it; yoshi ya expresses reckless resignation.
Third line, “waga sode mo”: my sleeves too, the subject of the first two lines.
Fourth line, “hagi no shizue no”: shizue are the lower branches, where dew gathers most; answering the autumn flowers of the topic.
Fifth line, “tsuyu ni yosoete”: yosou is to liken: likening my tears to the dew, the poem trailing off.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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