classic waka stream

長らへんと思ふ心ぞ露もなき
厭ふにだにも堪へぬ憂き身は
Roma-ji

Nagaraen to omou kokoro zo tsuyu mo naki itou ni dani mo taenu ukimi wa

English Translation
Any wish to live,
any heart for lingering on,
not the least have I,
this sorry self that cannot bear
even to loathe the world.
Meaning
I have not the slightest wish to live on, I whose wretched self cannot even bear to go on loathing this world.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 718

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Miscellany"
The poet has not the slightest wish to live on, being a wretched self that cannot even bear to loathe the world. It speaks of a heart weary of life, like the 'nagaraemauki' of the poems just before.

First line, “nagaraen to”: to live on, a line of six syllables, using the same verb nagarau as 'nagaraemauki' in 713.
Second line, “omou kokoro zo”: the binding particle zo is answered by the attributive naki in the third line.
Third line, “tsuyu mo naki”: tsuyu mo is not in the least; naki closes the zo construction, and the poem breaks here.
Fourth line, “itou ni dani mo”: dani is even; even loathing the world.
Fifth line, “taenu ukimi wa”: this wretched self that cannot bear it, inverted to take up the first three lines.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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