classic waka stream

秋の色は枯野ながらもあるものを
世のはかなさや浅茅生の露
Roma-ji

Aki no iro wa kareno nagara mo aru mono o yo no hakanasa ya asajiu no tsuyu

English Translation
The colors of fall
linger on, even in fields
withered as they are;
the transience of the world,
the dew upon the reed grass.
Meaning
The colors of autumn linger on even in the withered fields, yet the fleetingness of the world is like the dew on the sparse reed grass.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 767

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Topic unknown"
The colors of autumn remain even when the fields have withered, but the fleetingness of the world is like dew on the sparse reed grass, gone in a moment. Setting the autumn color that lingers in withered fields against the dew that vanishes at once, the poet stresses the transience of human life.

First line, “aki no iro wa”: the colors of autumn; a line of six syllables.
Second line, “kareno nagara mo”: even in fields withered as they are.
Third line, “aru mono o”: mono o is concessive, though it remains.
Fourth line, “yo no hakanasa ya”: ya is exclamatory; 'yo no hakanasa,' as in the second line of 756, takes up the theme of the sequence.
Fifth line, “asajiu no tsuyu”: ending on a noun, dew on the sparse reed grass as a figure for transience.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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