classic waka stream

頼もしき道には入りて行きしかど
我が身をつめばいかがとぞ思ふ
Roma-ji

Tanomoshiki michi ni wa irite yukishikado waga mi o tsumeba ikaga to zo omou

English Translation
The Way that gives hope,
she entered it, and so she went,
yet when I pinch myself,
measuring by my own heart,
I wonder how it truly is.
Meaning
She entered the Way that gives us hope and passed on, yet when I measure it against myself, I cannot help wondering how it truly is.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 816

Headnote: "Reply"
This is Jakuzen's reply. My sister entered the Way that gives hope and passed on, yet when I pinch myself and measure by my own heart, I wonder whether she truly attained rebirth, he says. He answers 'tanomoshikaranu' with 'tanomoshiki,' worrying over his sister's fate in the light of the uncertainty of his own practice.

First line, “tanomoshiki”: taking up 'tanomoshikaranu' in the fourth line of the preceding poem.
Second line, “michi ni wa irite”: having entered the Way, answering 'michi ni irade.'
Third line, “yukishikado”: though she passed on.
Fourth line, “waga mi o tsumeba”: pinching oneself to know another's pain, measuring by oneself.
Fifth line, “ikaga to zo omou”: zo is answered by the attributive omou; I wonder how it is.
Author
Jakuzen
Source
Sankashu
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