classic waka stream

露深き野辺になりゆく古里は
思ひやるにも袖しをれけり
Roma-ji

Tsuyu fukaki nobe ni nariyuku furusato wa omoiyaru ni mo sode shiorekeri

English Translation
Into fields where dew
lies deep, the old home is turning,
and only to think
of it from afar, my sleeves
are drooping, wet with tears.
Meaning
The old home, turning now into a field heavy with dew, I have only to think of it and my sleeves droop with tears.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 843

Headnote: "This I sent along with them"
This was sent together with the five replies. Only to think from afar of Sōkū's old home, falling into ruin like a dew-drenched field now that its master is gone, my sleeves droop with tears, the poet says. Taking up the dew-laden mugwort of 833, he conveys that even without visiting, his heart is there.

First line, “tsuyu fukaki”: where dew lies deep, hinting at tears.
Second line, “nobe ni nariyuku”: turning into a wild field.
Third line, “furusato wa”: the home where the departed lived.
Fourth line, “omoiyaru ni mo”: thinking of it from afar, his heart there though he does not come.
Fifth line, “sode shiorekeri”: shioru is to droop when wet, closing on sleeves soaked with tears.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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