classic waka stream

峰渡る嵐激しき山里に
添へて聞こゆる滝川の水
Roma-ji

Mine wataru arashi hageshiki yamazato ni soete kikoyuru takigawa no mizu

English Translation
Sweeping over peaks,
the storm blows fierce upon this
village in the hills,
and adding to its roaring
comes the sound of the rapids.
Meaning
In the mountain village where the storm sweeps fiercely over the peaks, there comes, added to its roar, the sound of the rushing stream.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 936

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Topic unknown"
In the mountain village where the storm sweeps fiercely over the peaks, the sound of the rushing stream is heard, added to the storm's roar, the poet says, picturing the wild loneliness of a mountain village filled with wind and water.

First line, “mine wataru”: sweeping over the peaks.
Second line, “arashi hageshiki”: where the storm is fierce.
Third line, “yamazato ni”: in the mountain village, taking up that of the preceding poem.
Fourth line, “soete kikoyuru”: heard along with the storm.
Fifth line, “takigawa no mizu”: ending on a noun, the water of the rushing stream.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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