classic waka stream

柴囲ふ庵のうちは旅立ちて
すどほる風もとまらざりけり
Roma-ji

Shiba kakou iori no uchi wa tabidachite sudōru kaze mo tomarazarikeri

English Translation
Within the hut fenced
with brushwood, its master gone
off on his travels,
even the wind passing through
does not stop to linger there.
Meaning
Inside the hut fenced with brushwood, its master gone on a journey, even the wind passes straight through and does not stay.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 965

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Inside the hut fenced with brushwood, its master away on a journey, even the wind passes straight through and does not stay, the poet says, expressing through the passing wind the loneliness of a wanderer's empty hut.

First line, “shiba kakou”: fenced with brushwood.
Second line, “iori no uchi wa”: inside the hut.
Third line, “tabidachite”: its master having set out on a journey.
Fourth line, “sudōru kaze mo”: even the wind passing straight through.
Fifth line, “tomarazarikeri”: it does not stay; keri closes with a sigh.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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