classic waka stream

過ぎて行く羽風なつかし鶯に
なづさひけりな梅の立枝に
Roma-ji

Sugite yuku hakaze natsukashi uguisu ni nazusaikeri na ume no tachie ni

English Translation
How dear is the breeze
of its wings as it flies past!
Close to the warbler
it has been, so I find,
on the plum's tall-reaching bough.
Meaning
How dear the breeze of the warbler's wings as it passes by! It has been close to the warbler, there on the tall branch of the plum.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 994

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Topic unknown"
How dear the breeze of the warbler's wings as it passes; it has been close to the warbler on the tall branch of the plum, the poet says, feeling in the wingbeat breeze of the warbler that perches on the plum a trace of the plum's own scent.

First line, “sugite yuku”: passing by; a line of six syllables.
Second line, “hakaze natsukashi”: hakaze is the breeze of beating wings; natsukashi, dear; the poem breaks here.
Third line, “uguisu ni”: to the warbler.
Fourth line, “nazusaikeri na”: nazusau is to grow close; na is exclamatory; the poem breaks here too.
Fifth line, “ume no tachie ni”: tachie is a tall-reaching branch; inverted to follow the fourth line.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
Prev Poem
Uguisu no koe ni satori o ubeki ka wa kiku ureshiki mo hakanakarikeri
Next Poem
Yama mo naki umi no omote ni tanabikite nami no hana ni mo magau shirakumo