classic waka stream

とをちさすひたの面に引く潮に
沈む心ぞ悲しかりける
Roma-ji

Tōchi sasu hita no omote ni hiku shio ni shizumu kokoro zo kanashikarikeru

English Translation
On the face of the
hita, where the tide pulls out
and ebbs away, how
sad it is, the heart that sinks,
going down with the tide.
Meaning
On the face of the hita, where the tide ebbs away, how sad is the heart that sinks along with it.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 1025

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Topic unknown"
How sad is the heart that sinks with the ebbing tide, the poet says. Tōchi sasu in the first line and hita in the second are of uncertain meaning, but the poem seems to lay his sinking heart over a tide ebbing across a broad expanse of water like a tidal flat.

First line, “tōchi sasu”: of uncertain meaning.
Second line, “hita no omote ni”: of uncertain meaning, apparently the face of a tidal flat.
Third line, “hiku shio ni”: with the ebbing tide.
Fourth line, “shizumu kokoro zo”: the sinking heart; zo is answered by keru in the fifth line.
Fifth line, “kanashikarikeru”: how sad it is.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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