classic waka stream

風荒き柴の庵は常よりも
寝覚めぞものは悲しかりける
Roma-ji

Kaze araki shiba no iori wa tsune yori mo nezame zo mono wa kanashikarikeru

English Translation
In my brushwood hut
where the wind blows rough and wild,
more than other nights,
waking in the dark of night
is what fills me most with grief.
Meaning
In my brushwood hut, where the wind blows so roughly, waking in the night is sadder than ever.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 1134

Headnote: "On the same journey"
Composed on the same journey through Shimotsuke as the preceding poem. In a brushwood hut where the wind blows roughly, waking in the night is sadder than usual.
Following the brushwood smoke of the preceding poem, this one sings of a night in a brushwood hut on the road. The loneliness of waking alone under a distant sky, roused by the rough wind, is condensed in the single word nezame.

First line, “kaze araki”: where the wind blows rough.
Second line, “shiba no iori wa”: in a hut of brushwood, echoing the brushwood smoke of the preceding poem.
Third line, “tsune yori mo”: more than usual.
Fourth line, “nezame zo mono wa”: zo is emphatic, answered by the attributive keru.
Fifth line, “kanashikarikeru”: closing the zo construction, "how sad it is."
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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