classic waka stream

訪へかしな情けは人の身のためを
憂き我とても心やはなき
Roma-ji

Toe kashi na nasake wa hito no mi no tame o uki ware tote mo kokoro ya wa naki

English Translation
Do come and visit!
Kindness is for the good
of the one who gives it—
even I, so full of sorrow,
how could I have no heart?
Meaning
Please come and visit me! Kindness benefits the one who gives it, after all. Even I, wretched as I am, surely have a heart.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 1285

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "One hundred and ten love poems"
Do come to visit, the poet urges; kindness benefits the giver too, and even I, wretched as I am, am not without a heart.
Drawing on the idea that kindness is not for others alone, he urges the beloved to visit. The lower lines plead that, however lowly, he still has a heart that loves.

First line, “toe kashi na”: kashi presses the point and na exclaims, "do come visit"; the poem breaks after the first line.
Second line, “nasake wa hito no”: kindness, of the one who gives it.
Third line, “mi no tame o”: o is concessive, "though it is for one's own good."
Fourth line, “uki ware tote mo”: even I in my wretchedness.
Fifth line, “kokoro ya wa naki”: ya wa is rhetorical, "have I no heart? I do."
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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