classic waka stream

菅の根の長く物をば思はじと
手向けし神に祈りしものを
Roma-ji

Suga no ne no nagaku mono o ba omowaji to tamukeshi kami ni inorishi mono o

English Translation
Like the sedge's roots,
long I'd not be lost in thought,
so I made my vow—
praying to the god to whom
I made offerings, and yet.
Meaning
I prayed, making offerings to the gods, that I would not brood long over love—and yet.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 1294

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "One hundred and ten love poems"
He prayed with offerings to the gods that he would not brood long over love, and yet in vain, the poet says.
He prayed to escape love's suffering, but the prayer went unheeded and his brooding continues. The closing mono o trails off, leaving the futility of prayer in the air.

First line, “suga no ne no”: a pillow word for "long."
Second line, “nagaku mono o ba”: brooding for long.
Third line, “omowaji to”: ji is negative volition, "that I would not."
Fourth line, “tamukeshi kami ni”: to the god I made offerings to.
Fifth line, “inorishi mono o”: mono o is concessive, "though I prayed," trailing off.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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