classic waka stream

捨てし折の心をさらに改めて
見る世の人に別れ果てなん
Roma-ji

Suteshi ori no kokoro o sara ni aratamete miru yo no hito ni wakarehatenan

English Translation
The heart I once had
at the time I cast it off,
renewing it once more,
from the people of this world
I would part for good and all.
Meaning
Renewing once more the heart I had when I first renounced the world, I will part for good from the people I see around me.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 1418

Headnote: none
Renewing the heart he had when he renounced the world, he will part for good from the worldly people he sees, the poet says.
Following the two preceding poems' reflections on incomplete renunciation, he resolves to return to the spirit of his first vows and break with the world anew. The movement of the heart from reflection to resolve shows through.

First line, “suteshi ori no”: of the time I cast it off; the line has an extra syllable.
Second line, “kokoro o sara ni”: that heart, once more.
Third line, “aratamete”: renewing it.
Fourth line, “miru yo no hito ni”: from the people of the world I see.
Fifth line, “wakarehatenan”: nan joins perfective nu and volitional n, "I will part completely."
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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