classic waka stream

花の折柏に包む信濃梨は
緑なれどもあかしの実と見ゆ
Roma-ji

Hana no ori kashiwa ni tsutsumu shinanonashi wa midori naredomo akashi no mi to miyu

English Translation
The Shinano pear,
wrapped up in oak leaves and sent
in the time of blossoms—
though still green, it seems to me
a ripe fruit, a token true.
Meaning
The Shinano pear, wrapped in oak leaves and sent in blossom time, is still green, yet to me it looks like a ripe red fruit, a token of your kindness.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 1445

Headnote: "A gravely ill person, seeing pear trees in flower in the fourth month, wished for a pear. When I asked around in hope, someone sent just one pear wrapped in withered oak leaves with a note saying, 'This is all there is'"
A gravely ill person, seeing pear blossoms in the fourth month, longed for a pear; Saigyō asked around, and someone sent a single pear wrapped in withered oak leaves, saying it was all there was. The Shinano pear sent in blossom time is still green, yet it looks to him a fruit of proof, a token of the giver's kindness.
It thanks one who searched out an out-of-season pear to send. Akashi seems to join "red" with ripeness and "proof," a witty thought that even a green pear looks red as a heartfelt token.

First line, “hana no ori”: in the season of pear blossoms.
Second line, “kashiwa ni tsutsumu”: wrapped in oak leaves.
Third line, “shinanonashi wa”: the pear from Shinano; the line has an extra syllable.
Fourth line, “midori naredomo”: though it is green.
Fifth line, “akashi no mi to miyu”: akashi seems to join "red" with "proof"; the line has an extra syllable.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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