classic waka stream

ひさぎ生ふる沢辺のちはら冬来れば
ひばりの床ぞあらはれにける
Roma-ji

Hisagi ouru sawabe no chihara fuyu kureba hibari no toko zo arawarenikeru

English Translation
Where the hisagi grow,
in the cogon fields by the marsh,
now that winter comes,
the skylarks’ resting places
lie revealed for all to see.
Meaning
In the cogon-grass fields by the marsh where the hisagi trees grow, winter has come and withered the grasses, and the skylarks’ nests now lie bare to the eye.
Commentary
Book Four Winter Poems 141

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Topic unknown."
As winter withers the grasses, the skylarks’ nests, hidden in the thickets through spring and summer, are laid bare. Yoshitada captures the turning of the season through a small, homely discovery, a typical poem of the open fields from his hand.
It appears among the ten winter poems of the Yoshitada-shū, and Retired Emperor Gotoba later composed a derivative poem on skylarks’ nests exposed on the withered plain of Musashino.

First line, “hisagi ouru”: “where hisagi grow,” a deciduous tree identified as the Japanese mallotus or the catalpa.
Second line, “sawabe no chihara”: a field of cogon grass by the marsh; with the first line it sets the stage for the change that follows.
Third line, “fuyu kureba”: the realis form with “ba,” “since winter has come,” implying the withering of the grass.
Fourth line, “hibari no toko zo”: the skylarks’ nests. The particle “zo” calls for the attributive “keru” at the close.
Fifth line, “arawarenikeru”: “have become exposed,” the attributive completing the kakari-musubi. Book One, poem 17, “sakura wa hana ni arawarenikeri,” likewise shows something hidden revealed by the season, pairing spring blossoms with the withered winter field.
Author
Sone no Yoshitada
Source
Shika Wakashu
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