classic waka stream

朝な朝な露に折れ伏す秋萩の
花踏みしだき鹿ぞ鳴くなる
Roma-ji

Asa na asa na tsuyu ni orefusu akihagi no hana fumishidaki shika zo nakunaru

English Translation
Morning after morning
bent and broken by the dew,
the autumn clover—
trampling on the blossoms there,
I can hear a stag cry out.
Meaning
Morning after morning, trampling the autumn clover blossoms bowed and broken by the dew, a stag is crying.
Commentary
Autumn Poems 243

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Poems on deer"
Morning after morning, a stag cries as it tramples the autumn bush clover blossoms that lie broken under the weight of dew. The poet captures the classic autumn pairing of clover and deer as a vivid scene of dew-soaked morning fields.
This poem was included in the Shokugosen Wakashū. Kamo no Mabuchi marked it with a circle.

Line 1, "morning after morning," is hypermetric.
Line 2 means "broken and bowed by the dew," the same scene as the clover drooping under heavy dew in 206.
Line 3 names the autumn bush clover.
Line 4 means "trampling the flowers." In the preceding poem, 242, the stag grieved over the fading clover; here the stag tramples those very flowers, contrasting the stag's relations to the clover.
Line 5 concludes the binding particle zo with the inferential naru.
Author
Minamoto no Sanetomo
Source
Kinkaishu
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