classic waka stream

大沢の池の水草枯れにけり
長き夜すがら霜や置くらむ
Roma-ji

Ōsawa no ike no mizukusa karenikeri nagaki yosugara shimo ya okuramu

English Translation
At Ōsawa Pond
all the water grasses
have withered away;
through the long night until dawn
does the frost lie settling there?
Meaning
The water grasses of Ōsawa Pond have withered; is the frost settling there all through the long night?
Commentary
Winter Poems 327

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Frost"
Seeing the withered water grasses of Ōsawa Pond in Saga, the poet wonders whether frost is settling there all through the long winter night. From something seen, the withered grasses, he imagines the frost of the night.

Line 1 names Ōsawa Pond at Daikaku-ji in Saga, Yamashiro, a poetic place.
Line 2 is the grasses growing in the pond.
Line 3: keri is exclamatory, and the poem pauses here. Line 3 of the next poem is the same.
Line 4 means "all through the long winter night."
Line 5 concludes the interrogative ya with the attributive of the present conjectural ramu. It shares its design with the last line of the next poem, "is the frost settling ever more?"
Author
Minamoto no Sanetomo
Source
Kinkaishu
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