classic waka stream

炭がまの煙も寂し大原や
ふりにし里の雪の夕暮れ
Roma-ji

Sumigama no keburi mo sabishi ōhara ya furinishi sato no yuki no yūgure

English Translation
From the charcoal kilns
even the smoke is lonely;
at Ōhara,
in the village long grown old,
in the snowy dusk of evening.
Meaning
Even the smoke rising from the charcoal kilns looks lonely—at Ōhara, in the old village, at dusk with the snow falling.
Commentary
Winter Poems 390

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Charcoal kiln"
Even the smoke rising from the charcoal kilns looks lonely, the poet sings of a snowy dusk in the old village of Ōhara. He portrays the loneliness of an evening wrapped in snow at Ōhara, a village known for its charcoal burning.

Line 1 means "of the charcoal kilns." After the two preceding poems, this is the third on charcoal burning.
Line 2 means "even the smoke is lonely," and the poem pauses here.
Line 3 names Ōhara in Yamashiro, known for charcoal burning; ya is an exclamatory particle.
Line 4: furi is a pivot word meaning both "grown old" and the snow "falling."
Line 5 is the same as that of 375, 382, and 383, and the poem ends on a noun.
Author
Minamoto no Sanetomo
Source
Kinkaishu
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