classic waka stream

五月闇木の下闇の暗ければ
おのれ惑ひて鳴く郭公
Roma-ji

Satsukiyami ko no shitayami no kurakereba onore madoite naku hototogisu

English Translation
In the fifth-month dark,
the darkness under the trees
grows so very dark
that losing its own way
the cuckoo cries aloud.
Meaning
In the darkness of the fifth month, the shadows beneath the trees are so dark that the cuckoo, losing its own way, cries out.
Commentary
Love Poems 507

Headnote: "Love in summer"
On a dark night of the fifth month, the shade beneath the trees is so deep that the cuckoo loses its way and cries; the poet lays over it his own weeping, lost in the darkness of love.
The Ruijū text titles it "On love in summer." Kamo no Mabuchi marked this poem with a circle.

Line 1 names the moonless dark of the rainy season.
Line 2 means "the dark beneath the trees," repeating yami to deepen the darkness.
Line 3 means "since it is dark."
Line 4 means "losing its own way," overlaid with the poet lost in love; like onore nomi in 412, it uses onore.
Line 5 ends on a noun. As with the cuckoo of 408, the bird's cry and the poet's weeping overlap.
Author
Minamoto no Sanetomo
Source
Kinkaishu
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