道遠し腰は二重にかがまれり
杖にすがりてここまでも来る
杖にすがりてここまでも来る
- Roma-ji
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Michi tōshi koshi wa futae ni kagamareri tsue ni sugarite koko made mo kuru
- English Translation
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The road is so long,
and my back is bent in two,
crooked and stooped;
leaning hard upon my staff
even this far I come.
- Meaning
- The road is long, and my back is bent double; yet, leaning on my staff, I have come even this far.
- Commentary
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Miscellaneous Poems 682
Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "At a place called Tsuchiya in Sagami there was a decrepit monk past ninety who came to me of his own accord; while telling tales of old, he wept as he told me he could no longer stand or sit, and then left. At that time I had my people compose on the theme of old age, and I too composed"
The road is long and the back bent double, yet leaning on a staff the old man has come this far. Like a direct sketch of the visiting monk, it shows the pitiable body of old age and the heart that still makes the journey.
The text transmitted by Teika spells line 4 differently, and the Ruijū text line 5.
Line 1 means "the road is far," with a break after the line.
Line 2 means "my back in two," bent deeply.
Line 3 means "is bowed," ri expressing a continuing state, with a break after the line.
Line 4 means "clinging to my staff," moving from the inner remembering of the three preceding poems to the old monk's visible form.
Line 5 means "I come even this far."
- Author
- Minamoto no Sanetomo
- Source
- Kinkaishu
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