汲み初めてくやしと聞きし山の井の
浅きながらや影を見るべき
浅きながらや影を見るべき
- Roma-ji
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Kumisomete kuyashi to kikishi yama no i no
asaki nagara ya kage o mirubeki - English Translation
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That mountain well which,
once drawn from, is said to leave
regret behind it—
while it stays as shallow, should
one be shown a face in it
- Meaning
- That mountain well one is said to regret ever drawing from—while it stays so shallow, how should anyone be shown a reflection in it?
- Commentary
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Part One: Wakamurasaki
To the poem Genji sent the girl herself, this came back from the nun's side. She takes over the well imagery he had used and answers that with a heart so shallow he cannot be entrusted with her granddaughter. His ardor was still not granted, and the correspondence with the hills went on without moving. In time the nun came down to the capital, and her illness grew worse.
"Once drawn from" is beginning to draw water, standing for entering into a relationship. "The well one regrets" follows an old poetic conceit about drawing from a shallow spring. "To see a reflection" is a face showing on the water, and carries both meeting the girl and giving her up. The skill of the poem lies in taking every word he set up and rebuilding it into the logic of a refusal.
- Author
- Murasaki Shikibu
- Source
- Genji Monogatari
- Other
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- Only while they hold, the cherries on that ridge where the storm wind is up, do you keep your heart with them— and how frail a thing that is
- Not shallowly, as the name of Mount Asaka says, do I love you— then why does the mountain well keep its reflection so far
- Even having met, nights of meeting come so rare— here inside this dream I would that this body here might lose itself once for all
- Will people pass on this as a tale of the world, though I make of my wretched life beyond compare a dream from which none awakes