classic waka stream

吉野川水の心は早くとも
滝の音には立てじとぞ思ふ
Roma-ji

Yoshinogawa mizu no kokoro wa hayaku tomo taki no oto ni wa tateji to zo omou

English Translation
Though the heart of the water
of the Yoshino River
runs swift and strong,
like the roar of its rapids
I am resolved to raise no sound
Meaning
However swift my heart may run, like the waters of the Yoshino River, I am resolved not to let it roar aloud like the rapids for all to hear.
Commentary
Book Thirteen Love Poems III 651

Headnote: "Topic unknown."
Even if love surges like the rapids of the Yoshino River, the poet resolves not to let it become a rumor heard by others like the roar of the falls. Likening passionate love to a swift current, it expresses the determination to keep it hidden.
The author is recorded as anonymous, and the name has not come down to us.
Continuing the river imagery of the preceding poem, it carries on the series of poems about guarding a secret love.

The first line, "yoshinogawa," is a poetic place in Yamato, sung as a swift-flowing river.
The second line, "mizu no kokoro wa," overlays the force of the current with the speaker's own heart.
The third line, "hayaku tomo," means "even if swift," an adversative hypothetical condition.
The fourth line, "taki no oto ni wa," means "in a way heard like the roar of the rapids," a figure for rumor spreading.
The final line, "tateji to zo omou," means "I resolve not to raise it," using the negative volitional ji and zo, resolved by the attributive omou.
Author
Unknown Poet
Source
Kokin Wakashu
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