青嶺ろにたなびく雲のいさよひに
物をぞ思ふ年のこのころ
物をぞ思ふ年のこのころ
- Roma-ji
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Aonero ni tanabiku kumo no isayoi ni mono o zo omou toshi no kono koro
- English Translation
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On the green-clad peaks
how the trailing clouds hang still,
wavering, unsure:
so I brood in heavy thoughts
in these days, these months, this year.
- Meaning
- Like the clouds that trail and linger over the green peaks, I wander in troubled thought these days of the year.
- Commentary
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Book Fourteen Azuma Poems 3511
Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Sōmon (Love Exchanges)"
Like clouds lingering motionless over the green peaks, the singer passes the days in uncertain brooding. The hovering of clouds on the mountain merges with a wavering heart.
It is one of the love exchanges and the second in the cloud sequence. The next poem also uses "aonero ni" and "isayou kumo," so the two form a pair.
The poet is unknown. The Azuma uta are thought to have been sung among the people of the eastern provinces, and they are marked by plain, open-hearted expression mixed with local dialect.
First line, "aonero ni": "Aonero" is a green peak, with the eastern suffix "ro." The same word appears in the third line of the next poem.
Second line, "tanabiku kumo no": Trailing clouds, continuing from "the clouds that cross the sky" in the preceding poem.
Third line, "isayoi ni": "Isayoi" is hesitating, lingering without moving on; the first three lines form a preface.
Fourth line, "mono o zo omou": "Zo" is a binding particle answered by the attributive "omou."
Final line, "toshi no kono koro": "These days of the year," ending on a noun.
- Source
- Manyoshu
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