classic waka stream

春霞たち別れ行く山道は
花こそ幣と散りまがひけれ
Roma-ji

Harugasumi tachiwakare yuku yamamichi wa hana koso nusa to chirimagaikere

English Translation
As the haze of spring
rises, and parting I set out
along the mountain road,
it is the flowers that like
offerings swirl and scatter down.
Meaning
Along the mountain road where I set out in parting amid the rising spring haze, it is the blossoms that swirl down like offerings for the journey.
Commentary
Book One Spring Poems 74

Headnote: "Topic unknown"
As one parts from others and sets off along a mountain road amid rising spring haze, the falling blossoms swirl about like the offerings scattered to pray for a safe journey. Overlaying a parting journey with falling flowers, the poem depicts the blossoms as if seeing the traveler off.

First line, "harugasumi," begins with spring haze like poem 42 of this book, but here it is the haze of late spring.
Second line, "tachiwakare yuku," is a pivot word combining haze "rising" and people "parting" as they set out.
Third line, "yamamichi wa," names the mountain road as the path of the journey.
Fourth line, "hana koso nusa to," sets the particle "koso," resolved by the perfective "kere" in the final line. It likens the falling flowers to offerings.
Final line, "chirimagaikere," means "they scatter in a swirl."
Author
Unknown Poet
Source
Shui Wakashu
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