classic waka stream

唐衣我は刀の触れなくに
まづたつものはなき名なりけり
Roma-ji

Karakoromo ware wa katana no furenaku ni mazu tatsu mono wa nakina narikeri

English Translation
Like a Chinese robe
that no blade has even touched,
so I have not touched her,
yet what is first cut and rises
is only a groundless name.
Meaning
Though no blade has touched the Chinese robe, it is cut; though I have not touched her, what rises first is only a groundless name.
Commentary
Book Twelve Love Poems II 704

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Topic unknown"
The poem says that, though no blade has touched the fine robe, what is first cut and rises is a groundless rumor. Placing "katana," the blade that cuts cloth, as a word associated with the robe, it pivots "tatsu" on cloth being "cut" and a rumor "rising." It laments, through the steps of tailoring a robe, the injustice of rumor running ahead though the poet has never touched the beloved. Following the preceding poem, 703, it sings of groundless rumor through words associated with the Chinese robe.

First line, "karakoromo," means a fine robe, the same word as the third line of the preceding poem, 703, "karakoromo."
Second line, "ware wa katana no," means "I, with a blade," the blade that cuts cloth being an associated word for the robe.
Third line, "furenaku ni," means "though it has not touched," with "naku ni" concessive, overlaid with the sense of not having touched the beloved.
Fourth line, "mazu tatsu mono wa," is a pivot word: "tatsu" means cloth being "cut" and a rumor "rising."
Final line, "nakina narikeri," means "is a groundless name," with "keri" expressing realization. It is the word that runs through the sequence on groundless rumor since the opening poem, 698.
Author
Unknown Poet
Source
Shui Wakashu
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