classic waka stream

秋の夜の心を尽くすはじめとて
ほのかに見ゆる夕月夜かな
Roma-ji

Aki no yo no kokoro o tsukusu hajime tote honoka ni miyuru yūzukuyo kana

English Translation
As the beginning
of the autumn nights that wring
my heart with longing,
faintly it can now be seen,
the crescent moon of evening
Meaning
As if to mark the beginning of autumn nights that wring the heart with longing, the evening moon appears faintly in the sky.
Commentary
Book Four Autumn Poems I 274

Headnote: "Composed when composing many poems on the moon"
Composed on an occasion when the poet composed many poems on the moon. As if to say it is the beginning of the autumn nights when one will gaze at the moon and exhaust one's heart in longing, the evening moon appears faintly in the sky. Foreshadowing the autumn brooding that will deepen as the moon waxes, this poem begins a run of moon poems.
The author, "Provisional Major Counselor Saneie," is Fujiwara no Saneie, son of Minister of the Right Fujiwara no Kinyoshi, who rose to Provisional Major Counselor. His elder brother was Minister of the Left Fujiwara no Sanesada.
It draws on an anonymous poem in the Kokin Wakashū, "When I see the moonlight leaking through the trees, I know that autumn, which wears out the heart, has come," seeing in the evening moon the start of that heart-wearying autumn. From this poem to the end of the book at 301, poems on the moon follow one another, and this one stands at their head.

First line, "aki no yo no": "of the autumn nights."
Second line, "kokoro o tsukusu": "exhausting the heart in brooding," drawing on "kokorozukushi no aki" of the Kokin poem.
Third line, "hajime tote": "as the beginning," a fitting phrase for the start of the sequence of moon poems.
Fourth line, "honoka ni miyuru": "faintly seen," the light of a still slender evening moon.
Fifth line, "yūzukuyo kana": "yūzukuyo" is the moon seen in the evening, or a night with such a moon, and "kana" is exclamatory.
Author
Fujiwara no Saneie
Source
Senzai Wakashu
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