classic waka stream

池もふりつつみ崩れて水もなし
むべ勝間田に鳥の居ざらん
Roma-ji

Ike mo furi tsutsumi kuzurete mizu mo nashi mube Katsumata ni tori no izaran

English Translation
The pond has grown old,
its embankment crumbled down,
and no water left;
no wonder that at Katsumata
not a bird is to be seen
Meaning
The pond has grown old, its embankment has crumbled, and no water is left. No wonder there are no birds at Katsumata.
Commentary
Book Eighteen Miscellaneous Poems III 1172

Headnote: "Furitsuzumi, the shaking drum"
This is a hidden-name poem, concealing the word "furitsutsumi" across "furi" in the first line and "tsutsumi" in the second. The pond has grown old, its bank crumbled and its water gone; no wonder no birds stay at Katsumata, she says. Looking at a pond gone to ruin and run dry, she agrees that it is only natural no birds are there.
The author, "Higo of the Nijō Grand Empress Dowager," was a lady-in-waiting who served Princess Reishi, the Nijō grand empress dowager, and a daughter of Fujiwara no Sadanari.
It is the fourth poem of the hidden-name series. The fifth line of the main text reads "tori no izaran," which does not match "tori mo izaramu" in the kana reading line; here the main text is followed.

First line, "ike mo furi": "furi" is the continuative of "furu," to grow old. From here into the next line lies hidden "furitsutsumi."
Second line, "tsutsumi kuzurete": "tsutsumi" is the embankment holding the pond's water, "has crumbled."
Third line, "mizu mo nashi": "no water either," and the poem pauses here. It repeats the "mo" of "ike mo" in the first line, piling up the signs of ruin.
Fourth line, "mube Katsumata ni": "mube" means "no wonder." Katsumata is the pond of Katsumata in Yamato, a poetic place for which the Man'yōshū has a joking poem about the pond having no lotuses.
Fifth line, "tori no izaran": "zara" is the irrealis of the negative "zu" and "n" a conjectural auxiliary. Answering "mube" in the fourth line, it accepts that it is only natural no birds are there.
Author
Nijō Taikōtaigōgū no Higo
Source
Senzai Wakashu
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