classic waka stream

日に添へてうらみはいとど大海の
ゆたかなりける我が思ひかな
Roma-ji

Hi ni soete urami wa itodo ōumi no yutaka narikeru waga omoi kana

English Translation
As the days go by,
resentment, like the bay, grows
like the great sea,
so abundant has it grown,
this deep feeling that is mine!
Meaning
As the days go by my resentment swells ever greater, and my feelings have grown as abundant as the great sea.
Commentary
Love Poems 683

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Love"
With each passing day, the poet's resentment toward the beloved swells ever deeper and fuller, like the great sea. Urami joins resentment with ura-mi, looking at the bay, and the vastness of the resentment is expressed through the great sea. Using yutaka, abundant, a word that is usually welcome, for resentment gives the lament an ironic edge.

First line, “hi ni soete”: as the days go by.
Second line, “urami wa itodo”: urami is a pivot word joining resentment with ura-mi, looking at the bay, associated with the sea; itodo is all the more.
Third line, “ōumi no”: like the great sea, a figure for the vastness of resentment.
Fourth line, “yutaka narikeru”: yutaka is brimming and abundant, associated with the sea.
Fifth line, “waga omoi kana”: kana is exclamatory, lamenting the poet's overflowing feelings.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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