classic waka stream

影薄み松の絶え間を漏り来つつ
心細しや三日月の空
Roma-ji

Kage usumi matsu no taema o morikitsutsu kokorobososhi ya mikazuki no sora

English Translation
Its light is so faint,
slipping through the gaps between
the branches of the pines—
how forlorn it makes me feel,
the sky with the crescent moon.
Meaning
Its light so faint, slipping again and again through the gaps in the pines, how forlorn it is, the sky with its crescent moon.
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 1151

Headnote: "Seeing the moonlight glimmer faintly through a break in the pines"
Composed on seeing faint moonlight glimmer through a gap in the pines. Its light is so weak that it only slips through the breaks in the pines, and how forlorn the crescent-moon sky makes him feel.
The thin pale light of the crescent is drawn as leaking through the gaps in the pine branches, its frailty expressed as kokorobososhi; the thinness of the light is laid over the forlornness of the heart.

First line, “kage usumi”: mi expresses cause, "since its light is faint."
Second line, “matsu no taema o”: through the breaks between the pine branches.
Third line, “morikitsutsu”: tsutsu shows repetition, "slipping through again and again."
Fourth line, “kokorobososhi ya”: ya is exclamatory, "how forlorn."
Fifth line, “mikazuki no sora”: ending on a noun, the thin pale moonlight lingers.
Author
Saigyō
Source
Sankashu
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