classic waka stream

おのづから寂しくもあるか山深み
草の庵の雪の夕暮れ
Roma-ji

Onozukara sabishiku mo aru ka yama fukami kusa no iori no yuki no yūgure

English Translation
Of itself it seems
so lonely and so forlorn—
the hills are so deep—
at my hut of grass and thatch
in the snowy dusk of evening.
Meaning
How lonely it feels of itself—so deep are the mountains—at my grass hut in the snowy dusk.
Commentary
Winter Poems 375

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Snow"
Because the mountains are so deep, the snowy dusk at his grass hut feels lonely of itself, the poet sings. He layers things that call up loneliness: a hut deep in the mountains, snow, and evening.
The Ruijū and Teika texts give line 4 as koke no iori no, "of the moss hut."

Line 1 means "of itself, naturally."
Line 2: ka is exclamatory, and the poem pauses here. It is the same as line 2 of 367.
Line 3 uses mi to show cause, "because the mountains are deep."
Line 4 is a humble dwelling built of grass, taking up "my hut" in the preceding poem.
Line 5 ends on a noun, giving last the hour when loneliness is deepest. Poems 382, 383, and 390 end with the same line.
Author
Minamoto no Sanetomo
Source
Kinkaishu
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