classic waka stream

しなが鳥猪名野の原の篠枕
枕の霜や宿る月影
Roma-ji

Shinagadori Inano no hara no shinomakura makura no shimo ya yadoru tsukikage

English Translation
Bird of long breath,
on the plain of Inano
a pillow of bamboo grass—
is it the frost upon that pillow
or the lodging moonlight?
Meaning
On the plain of Inano, with bamboo grass for my pillow, is that frost upon the pillow, or the moonlight lodging there?
Commentary
Miscellaneous Poems 581

Headnote continued from the preceding poem: "Frost at a lodging on a journey"
Sleeping on the plain of Inano with bamboo grass for a pillow, the poet sees something white; is it frost on the pillow, or lodging moonlight? The conceit mistakes the whiteness of frost and of moonlight. Kamo no Mabuchi marked this poem with a sign of praise.
The Ruijū text places it in its travel section. The text transmitted by Teika reads line 3 as sasamakura.

Line 1, shinagadori, is a pillow word for Ina, the same as in 568 of this book.
Line 2 means "of the plain of Inano," a poetic place in Settsu.
Line 3 means "a pillow of bamboo grass."
Line 4 means "is it frost on the pillow?" repeating "pillow" from line 3, ya interrogative.
Line 5 means "the lodging moonlight," ending on a noun; it shares this last line with 566 of this book, turning moon in dew into moon in frost.
Author
Minamoto no Sanetomo
Source
Kinkaishu
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